Oh I usually take a while to figure out the most basic things, so I'm sure we'd be laughing together. And aww, if I realized how much you enjoyed it, I'd link it to you more often! Shan gets regular snippets.
Yeah, I'm generally pretty good with dialogue, but lately I feel like I have forgotten that my characters often have opinions and thoughts even while they are talking, no matter how I seem to talk. *chuckle* And my first draft of AG is actually like that; there's a lot of breaking up the dialogue to go into epic essay detail about Rose May's opinions. I'm hoping to strike a balance eventually.
Oh god I do the same thing. The two of us need to discover some Confidence Pills, eh? *chuckle*
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Date: 2011-07-26 05:32 am (UTC)Yeah, I'm generally pretty good with dialogue, but lately I feel like I have forgotten that my characters often have opinions and thoughts even while they are talking, no matter how I seem to talk. *chuckle* And my first draft of AG is actually like that; there's a lot of breaking up the dialogue to go into epic essay detail about Rose May's opinions. I'm hoping to strike a balance eventually.
Oh god I do the same thing. The two of us need to discover some Confidence Pills, eh? *chuckle*