Thank you so much for the critique! And yeah, not giving the reader enough detail is a huge problem I have in my works. I really need to find a way to give new readers enough information to realize what my world is like, without having it break the "this is all normal for us" narrative. I'm glad you liked it, though!
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Date: 2013-01-01 10:45 pm (UTC)