I'm deeply curious about where you will end up with this. I'm liking the guard; I appreciate seeing a decent human being in a position of authority. Mahli as something other than a creeper is weird, though
One comment: Up top you use "flee" as a noun; should be "flight". Likewise, "grandeur" is used as an adjective, but it's a noun.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
branchandroot
no subject
Date: 2012-03-31 10:55 pm (UTC)One comment: Up top you use "flee" as a noun; should be "flight". Likewise, "grandeur" is used as an adjective, but it's a noun.