Parallel Thinking = Hilarious Typos

Today in AG, Hafstra apparently "shruggled" upon being presented with an unfamiliar word.

I guess this is what happens if you struggle to shrug, or are in a struggle and shrug it off?

Will try to post excerpts later today.

Julius's role in the novel is to ask the obvious

Okay, it isn't really. But with how I write him, sometimes I wonder.

( Hafstra's role at the moment is BE UTTERLY CRAZY MAN )

I'm not too pleased with this scene, mostly because I don't like using my vampires as deus ex machinas (Mahli would probably make more sense here, but I imagined Nur doing it, so there it is). In the last draft, this scene happened upon Rose May's first meeting with Hafstra, where Rheanna was there to provide the translation for "my wife". But somehow I forgot to have Rose May ask why Hafstra was in Welen in the first place; instead they just talked about him being arrested and boring shit like that.

So yeah, may end up rewriting those scenes so this can go in its proper place. Let me know what you think, though.