Meanwhile, in Writing Land

I hate when I'm writing something and I can TELL I'm going to have to revise it. Like... The prose reads like a movie script, the emotions just don't feel right, the entire thing just isn't in the mood and setting it's supposed to have. Poor Hafstra, your final scene is supposed to feel stronger than this. I think I'll back away from it and let it simmer in my head.

Also. Morningstar Farms meatballs: meh. THe flavour is too strong and the texture is all wrong. But Morningstar Farms veggie dogs? The flavour is just strong enough and the texture is perfect. I suppose it IS easier to mimic horrified processed shit. Oh well. Omnom!

( Here: Have some Atmosphere )

So yeah. Think I'll play some video games now. And hope my mouth stops hurting.

Tschuess.