Congrats on finishing the short! I agree with your <3ing of these two. On a random, possibly incorrect note: looking at their arc (Kader saves Tegre from suicide, eventually Tegre is brain-healthy enough to leave and marries Eílis, Kader drags her sorry ass to his home and gets saved by *him*), I really like that their problems don't get fixed simultaneously.

I'm not sure what I think about the style of the dialogue, though. It reads as if punctuation is missing.