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The Cold: Excerpts
Originally posted here over a year ago. I usually don't go back to short stories, but I <3 these two, so yeah.
It's gotten pretty long (about 6.2K words), so have some excerpts.
( TW for hints at SI, some casual sexism and classism )
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( Sexism, yay! )
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( Tegre is all D: about this journey )
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( Blankets and >:| from Tegre, TW for mention of rape )
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( Last but not least, these two are SO BAD at hugging )
So yeah. I need to make a lot of edits here and there, but otherwise, completed a short story, yay.
Now to sleep. If you want the whole thing to read and/or critique, let me know and I'll send it over.
It's gotten pretty long (about 6.2K words), so have some excerpts.
( TW for hints at SI, some casual sexism and classism )
---
( Sexism, yay! )
---
( Tegre is all D: about this journey )
---
( Blankets and >:| from Tegre, TW for mention of rape )
---
( Last but not least, these two are SO BAD at hugging )
So yeah. I need to make a lot of edits here and there, but otherwise, completed a short story, yay.
Now to sleep. If you want the whole thing to read and/or critique, let me know and I'll send it over.