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SMW ([personal profile] smw) wrote in [personal profile] breezeshadow 2012-01-13 07:41 pm (UTC)

I think the question is less "is this cliche?" and more "does this fall into line with facts previously established about Welen?"

It looks so to me, but as the author you're the one with the ability to view the story within the complete context of the world and decide if it resonates properly.

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