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Brittany ([personal profile] breezeshadow) wrote 2012-01-13 07:31 pm (UTC)

Ahhh, yes, I did forget about that; I've heard that myself. SHe definitely needs to have some emotion, though I tried to hint that she's sort of shut down once she knew what was going to happen. I'm also not sure how about my portrayal of her husband, society's reaction, etc -- does any of it seem cliche?

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